Comments on: Short Horror Stories Part 1

By: jesse10

jesse10 — Wed, 09 Jan 2013 00:13:41 +0000

i like them

By: Caroline

Caroline — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 18:52:36 +0000

These aren’t good stories!

By: Caroline

Caroline — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 18:51:21 +0000

I think that the grammar should be better, but it’s not nice to say its typed like a ” brain dead autistic person” Guy!!!!!!!!!!! >:(

By: Guy

Guy — Sat, 26 May 2012 11:47:53 +0000

Dang you guys are retarded. Really? The grammar needs to jump from the first grade level (at which these stories are written), to an eighth grade level. At least then these stories would be intelligable and frightning, instead of seeming like a brain dead autistic person told them. And they say that children are the future. If this rings true our world is going to end up like the movie idiocracy…..

By: mini

mini — Sun, 13 Nov 2011 13:15:35 +0000

The story were soooo scary!!!

By: someone

someone — Sun, 10 Jul 2011 06:16:05 +0000

somethimes i wonder if these stories are real O_O….
1st story- …you know your english was really bad so i made it sound fake D:..
2nd story- you yourself said you werent sure. but i sort of believe this 2nd story because when i was 10 i was at a b-party at a hotel she got a large room there was a giant curtain to seperate the bedroom and the living room not a door a curtain . we didnt use the curtain so we pushed it to the side. i am not the type to fall asleep well. there was 7 people 3 giant beds and a couch i offered to sleep on the couch. so i was just there thinking about stuff when i saw a shadow a black shadow not on the ground standing up right next to the curtain. its was 2 o-clock i was sweating cold sweat i was so afraid i could not move i didnt even try to wake up my friend. it was just there just swaying left to right i tried to sleep but i couldn’t i would dose off for a few minutes but the thing was still there it didnt look at me it was just there. fianlly it was 6 o-clock there was the sun. the shadow was there but it seems faint i wanted to go up and touch it but i heard shadow ghost are bad ghost so i fell asleep and woke up and the shadow was not there. i asked a friend about that room number (cause her dad is the manager there) the room number was 301? i dont remeber but it was something like that and i said it was on the 24th floor. she said never go to the 24th floor she told me a guard was passing each floor fianlly he went to the 24th floor there was a kid crying at room 304 but on the list no one was in room 304 so he went in and say a kid crying and bouncing a ball. he went and called the front desk to make sure they said no one lives in that one when he looked back the kid was ot there but the ball was still bouncing. *oops* pretty long well thats why i believe the 2nd story
3rdstory- good story but i wasnt that scary :3
4th story- it was scary but did you find out how she died?

By: Riddhi

Riddhi — Fri, 08 Jul 2011 16:10:30 +0000

D last story kinda freaked me out……. M scared to use washrooms from now on:) but d other 2 stories r so crazy

By: Rukaiya

Rukaiya — Sun, 01 May 2011 14:50:39 +0000

Well these stories scared me. But, i think these are fake. So, in your lifetime if these things happen to you, what would you do in case?
I have also been scared by a ghost when i was 4.

By: Micaela

Micaela — Fri, 11 Feb 2011 06:33:53 +0000

I love scary stories loads!
But scary stories are really freaker cause you can actully see whats going on.Sitll these are some pretti spokey tales

By: Miranda

Miranda — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:06:15 +0000

wtc?this means what the crap.this kinda scares me a little bitt but i kinda hate it.sorry though! Seed ya l8r! 8=)