Friend
Thanks to Alex
This incident happened when I was 13 years old. My best friend, John, was living next to me. We did homework together and helped each other. We were famous in school, lots of people knew us. Since he lived right next to me, he came to my house, played computer games and slept over as often as he could.
One day John came over to my house and asked if I wanted to watch a movie with him. I said yes. When we were on the way to the cinema, I fell asleep in the bus. I dreamt a weird dream. In it was my grandfather who died about 5 years ago. He told me the bus would crash with a car. Immediately I woke up. I told John not to watch the movie. He asked me why and I told him about my dream. But he did not believe it and said that if I did not want to watch, then I could just drop off there and then. So I get off the bus and went home.
When I arrived home, I was just in time to watch the evening news. I was so surprised. The news reported the bus John and I were in, had crashed with a car. Everyone died in the crash. I felt so sad.
When I was asleep. I woke up in the middle of the night to pee. As I was washing my hands on the sink, I realised there was blood on the mirror. It said, “YOU SHOULD JUST TELL MY MOM NOT TO GO TO THE MOVIE!!!” I freaked out. When I turned around, there was my friend John, and there was blood all over his face. I screamed and fainted.
When I woke up I was in hospital. My mom asked me what happened so I told her everything that I could remember. She touched my head and asked, “Are you feeling alright?” It was apparent that my mum did not believe me. I was afraid to go home but I had no choice.
It was night again. I was really scared so I closed my door and slept. I woke up in the middle of the night, when I heard music from outside my door. It was “Fat Lip”, John’s favourite song. I mustered enough courage and went outside to check. There was a figure standing in front of my radio. When I got close to him, he turned around and it was John. He turned menacing all of a sudden and tried to kill me. He choked my neck and I said, “I’m really sorry, I should have told your mum about my dream.” I was crying and repeating, “I’m so sorry…” When John heard that he just let go of my neck and he put his arm around my neck and said, “It’s alright, it was my fault that I did not listen to you.” Before he left, he said, “Goodbye my friend…” and disappeared into thin air.
My parents came out to the living room and asked what had happened. I did not tell them anything, because my parents were not going to believe my story. Till today, I did not tell anybody except to you.
I live in a city where buses are a main form of travel. Since I’ve been here, I’ve heard of three bus-car collisions. In those crashes, the only people that died were in the car. The people on the bus rarely even had a bruise to show for it. So… I appreciated this story but found it a bit… feeble.
Commented by Lindsay — December 30, 2005 @ 5:33 am
Will clarified with Alex π
Commented by Tony — December 30, 2005 @ 2:09 pm
yeah umm..this all kinda sounds like final destination 2….but interesting spin of events
Commented by face — October 20, 2006 @ 11:37 pm
Scary! When and where did this happen exactly?
Commented by roo — July 15, 2007 @ 8:43 am
nice story!!!!
Commented by klein — August 19, 2007 @ 5:23 pm
o my ville valo!! that is so cool! it happens to me ALL the time, except not a dead relative but a feeling or premonition.
Commented by eMo — August 27, 2007 @ 12:55 am
yes,,!thrilling but friendly
nice story
Commented by perusu — October 27, 2007 @ 8:38 pm
Must have been a flimsy bus. I heard that those things, when well made, will crush anything smaller than them in their path.
Commented by Icalasari — December 27, 2007 @ 7:23 am
i want to know why john attacked him them when he apologized he said “it’s alright i should have listened”……. and then disappeared. that makes noe sense really if u think about it
Commented by nic — February 6, 2008 @ 7:04 pm
Loooool.. when will the movie be ready? :p
Commented by Endro — June 24, 2008 @ 6:58 pm
Fat lip is a funky chunky song!!!! all ghosts have good in them!! U just have 2 believe in God!!!!!!!! But watever U do, don’t eat P-plums. Or u will have 2 do the plum-butt wiggle dance with Plumpy 4 the rest of yur life!!! and thats horrible!!! trust me, i wud know! π
Commented by proffessor Plum — June 24, 2008 @ 10:44 pm
I THINK THAT YOU LIKE HIM!( R U A GRL?) π
Commented by Miranda — March 25, 2009 @ 5:09 am
:*P COOL D!
Commented by COOL — March 26, 2009 @ 4:47 am
best sory ive heard on this websie…………….. Class
Commented by lee e — June 3, 2009 @ 11:04 pm
er final destanation with a new twist……………
Cool
Commented by pikle — June 6, 2009 @ 8:16 pm
Nice story but thats about it.
Commented by Brad — June 26, 2009 @ 12:57 am
freaky i cant believe it sooooooooooo freaky!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol!
Commented by shelly — June 30, 2009 @ 2:03 am
nice show why choke him
Commented by shelly — June 30, 2009 @ 2:04 am
That ist simmilar to a uhhhh….sorry I don’t know the word ist ziet in german oh time! That ist simmilar to the time I went to get on a plane I was supposed to be on the 9/11 plane but Ich woke up for die flight and Ich couldn’t finde all of miene things after I had allready missed the fight I sat there in my hotel room watching tv and I swear I heard voices in the bedroom. I walked in there and all of my missing things were laying on my bed in a colosal heep and the window I had locked was now wide open…
Commented by Nicole — July 11, 2009 @ 3:13 pm
maybe that was a dreem too. i meen no person can come back to life its only in fiilms. but its a cool STORY!
Commented by Lady diime — July 12, 2009 @ 11:02 pm
Confirm its a dream or not
did u watch final destination before going to bed
Commented by Queen — July 13, 2009 @ 6:47 pm
. . nice 0ne . . .
; ;;;;; ; ;
Commented by angel — August 28, 2009 @ 11:13 am
totaly fake
not reel
poosey
grow up
get a life
Commented by shannon saunders — November 12, 2009 @ 4:44 pm
Not real, cool story to read but a real friend would not choke you. Plus you jump from one scene to the next like book.
Commented by Kenna — November 29, 2009 @ 5:17 pm
gud omwedfjodn
Commented by khay anne — December 19, 2009 @ 10:47 am
i agree with nic when is the movie? can i be in it if u make the movie?
Commented by mackkirk1 — January 2, 2010 @ 5:43 am
hey can I be John in the movie? I have strangle in my name
Commented by jorgin von strangle — March 26, 2010 @ 6:40 am
YOU IS A LIYAHH
Commented by DAnnyielle — April 1, 2010 @ 7:16 am
People… I had that kinda dreams too……
But that where other kind of things.
Like tomorrow he gonna fall whit his bike.
And it happend, my friends just think im crazy.
But i don’t later in 2009 i said to my friend…
Tomorrow look out for a bus that comes in your back…
if you don’t he will scared you whit he’s horn.
He just don’t listen as normaly and the next day.
The bus comes and it let is horn ring….
My friend fall and said later that day when i visit him…
Sorry i should believe you…..
So is said doesn’t matter but i dreamd it.
And he said why you dream that kinda things…?
I said i have something i am other than others an u are that too!
Than he begin to cry get the f*** outta here you f****** jurk.
I said why you do this…?
Next week he died….
I feel sorry but should I ?
X Addicted-2-Ghosts
Commented by Addicted-2-Ghosts — July 28, 2010 @ 5:41 pm
Ty for comments later
X Addicted-2-Ghosts
Commented by Addicted-2-Ghosts — July 28, 2010 @ 5:42 pm
jhon was a true friend of him if not he could kill him by now
Commented by azaan — August 10, 2010 @ 7:02 pm
this story is superb and my mom is taecher and she said this is a realy cool story
Commented by LAM — August 24, 2010 @ 8:59 pm
DAnnyiel i dont appri8 how u called alex a “LIYAHH”
Commented by tahnia(pronounced “tanya”) — November 19, 2010 @ 12:47 pm
kwlllllll π π
Commented by carrissa — January 1, 2011 @ 6:27 pm
its like a japanese version of final destination coz there’s all these blood stains and killer ghosts..but i still wonder why d ghost would tell alex that he/she should have told john’s mother when he only had d vision while he was riding d bus..wouldnt it be too late to warn the mother (who i presume is still back at their house) when john’s already off to the movies?..unless she was with them and died with them at the crash..
Commented by DDDUUUU — June 8, 2011 @ 9:56 am
how’s alex by the way?..death might be after him coz he kinda cheated death that fateful day..*dan dan dan…..*TO BE CONTINUED….
Commented by DDDUUUU — June 8, 2011 @ 9:59 am
*clap clap clap
very nice story ^.^b
but i dun think it’s a real one. .obviously scripted
but i liked the part ” Till today, I did not tell anybody EXCEPT YOU.” *chills
good job ^.^b
Commented by chibi — May 1, 2012 @ 3:12 pm
today i wokup in the morning and the door wose open i saw a white figur with black hair and it just fuded away i never saw it agen
Commented by horror girl — April 4, 2013 @ 3:49 pm
*clap clap clap
very nice story ^.^b
but i dun think itβs a real one. .obviously scripted
yeah umm..this all kinda sounds like final destination 2β¦.but interesting spin of events
Commented by fatiha — April 29, 2013 @ 6:25 pm
The news reported the bus John and I were in, had crashed with a car. Everyone died in the crash.
I didn’t know that all people die in the bus when they crashed with a car. It is very interesting story.
Commented by Jane Austin — April 8, 2014 @ 4:01 pm